the day
starts in bed
we make
coffee and
something from milk
flour eggs
water
in the shower
warming us together
after breakfast
you brush
a dollop of shampoo
on my nose
as I rinse my hair
even the nothing
you do
is something
to me
For me, this is such a romantic piece. I love it.
I also think, for people who are poetry-adverse, this poem makes it easy.
What do you think?
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